Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Kevin Zeza-zoo

One cold, stormy Sunday a humungous, enormous, dark grey elephant named Kevin was walking around searching for a place to stay, even though he was super starving and exhausted.  Suddenly, for a second he froze.  All he could see was a nice tasty piece of juicy meat.  He couldn't put up with the fact, the meat was killing him.  His tongue was so dry and solid, all he could think about was eating.  The last time he ate was two weeks ago.  He walked up slowly and carefully.  Then in a tick of five seconds, some tigers and lions jumped out of the bush fearlessly.  Then the elephant ran so amazingly fast that his wrinkly old feet tripped up on a large, big cliff.  He flew up into a cloud and zoomed straight down and held on tight to a tree.  The fast tigers and lions fell off the cliff and died.  Then the elephant found an awesome habitat.
By Shawney

3 comments:

  1. interesting story its also long.

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  2. wow! what an interesting story and well written, with lots of adjectives

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  3. 10/10 it was an awsome story

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