Monday, April 2, 2012

The Elephant


Once upon a time a cop elephant was spying on bad birds that stole food from goodies.  The cop elephant pulled them into jail and said "Hurry up!"  They ran fast into the jungle.  The elephant chased the badies and stamped on them and killed them.  The police hid them behind the police station so they wouldn't get in trouble from their family.

The elephant felt sad for the bird's family because they lost their babies that were bad.  He said sorry to the birds family.  Then the birds hugged the elephant and cried.

By Ethan

4 comments:

  1. well don ethan good work :)xxxx

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  2. Well done Ethan you have done really well and I am glad the elephant said sorry and they all ended up as friends. xox

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  3. Ethan you did a really interesting story, because you put a-lot of effort in your story.

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