Wednesday, February 22, 2012

The Soccer Cat

One day I was chasing a mouse and ran behind a soccer ball.  The boy got distracted.  The boy missed the ball and I ducked.  The boy tried again.  He almost hit me.  He kicked the ball.  I went flying towards the goal.  Next minute... splat.  I went "Meow! I am as flat as a pancake" I said.
By Cole 
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14 comments:

  1. TaylaFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    I love it when you were splat

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  2. stephenFebruary 24, 2012 at 3:53 PM

    I liked it when you said I went flying

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  3. shontayaFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:23 PM

    i liked it when u said i went flying

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  4. shawneyFebruary 25, 2012 at 4:18 PM

    I love your describing words

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  5. shontayaFebruary 29, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    i like it when u said splat

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  6. shontayaFebruary 29, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    i like your decribing words

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  7. trioMarch 1, 2012 at 2:20 PM

    i like it when you siad i was shacing a moues

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  8. darcMarch 1, 2012 at 2:29 PM

    i like the but you said next minute

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  9. cleoMarch 1, 2012 at 2:34 PM

    cole i think u could make your story beter by useing ineresting words

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  10. arohaMarch 1, 2012 at 2:38 PM

    I like your story cole. But it could off had more interesting words.

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  11. marshall from space 5March 6, 2012 at 6:11 PM

    i liked it when you said you went flying

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  12. HannahMarch 21, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    Like it when you said "I am as flat as a pancake!

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  13. kirtMarch 26, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    intereting story cole

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  14. EricApril 2, 2012 at 7:13 PM

    i like your storiy becase you put flat as a pancake

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