Thursday, March 8, 2012

The Twin Bears

There were two twin bears.  The bears were called Leo and Geo.  They were as black as a beetle and fuzzy as a cat.  One day the bears grew hungry.  The bears saw two white, smooth horses.  They licked their lips.  The jumped over the fence! What happened...
SCRATCH! The bears scratched their claws through their skin.

"Burp! Pardon me" said the twins.
By Latisha
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7 comments:

  1. Mrs PedenMarch 8, 2012 at 7:17 PM

    What a sad ending Latisha! I liked it when you describe the bears as "black as a beetle and fuzzy as a cat"

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  2. shawneyMarch 9, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    i liked how you used an exclamationmark in your story

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  3. cleoMarch 26, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    latisha i liked your interesting words

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  4. EricMarch 26, 2012 at 6:23 PM

    i like what you said black as a beetle

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  5. trioMarch 26, 2012 at 6:29 PM

    you had good describing words Latisha

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  6. shontayaMarch 26, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    It was interesting becauseyou said as fuzzy as a cat

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  7. shondivoApril 2, 2012 at 7:13 PM

    I like your Adjectives Latishia

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