Thursday, March 8, 2012

The Circus Bears


One day there lived two bears.  They were running late to go to the circus.  Then these horses were walking past.  The two bears said "Hey maybe those two horses can give us a ride!"
The said to the two horse "Can you please give us a ride?"
The horses said "Yes.  Where do you want us to take you?"
One of the bears said "Can you take us to the circus before it's 7 o'clock please?"
When the two bears got there, they said to the horses "Would you like to join us in the circus?"
The horses said "Well yes, thank you!"
By Shontaya

8 comments:

  1. I think that bears riding horses in the circus would be a great act in the show!

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  2. wll done Shontaya i like your story

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  3. I like how you said lets catch a ride on the horse

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  4. I wish I had bears like that.

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  5. What a creative story Shontaya. But think about it, you could of made it interesting.

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  6. I like it when you said can you get us to thje circas befor 7o'lock

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  7. sure hannah i will think about making my story interesting!! :)

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