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Once upon a time a pink jellyfish lived in a cold, black, rocky cave. The cave was under the pacific ocean where the green, friendly crocodiles lived. The pink jellyfish trained the crocodiles to fight their enemies. Their enemy was the grey, mean sharks. One day the jellyfish was so tired, he decided to have a nap in his rocky cave. The sharks came! They stared at the jellyfish's tentacles. SNAP! The shark tried to bite the poor pink jellyfish. He woke up. He ran away faster than a lightning bolt! His eyes lit up and his tentacles caught on fire. He searched everywhere for the crocodiles. Finally he found them in the sharks trap. The jellyfish broke the trap with one of his bombs. He sped off to Taupo and lived happily ever after.
By Abbey
Abbey I like all the describing words you used at the start of your story. The ending was a little bit strange. How did the jellyfish get to Taupo?
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DeleteAbbey I relly like your interesting words but you could us more interesting words at the end.
ReplyDeleteAbby i liked your storiy because you yos alot of discrving words
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ReplyDeleteI liked it when you said his eyes lit up
ReplyDeleteI like your decribing words Abbey
ReplyDeleteLike your interesting words Abbey. They are very Good because they are very very attractive to the reader.
ReplyDeleteAbbey your story was weird when you said you lived happliy ever after in taupo
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