"Who said you could eat my meat?"
"Well I was so hungry. Is there some way I could help you?"
But the leopard was not paying attention. He was busy looking at a girl leopard named Cloudy. The mouse said "Do you like her?"
"Well y-ye-yes."
"I can help you make her your valentine."
"Yes please" said the leopard.
"All you need to do is get some meat and ask her if she wants some."
So he did and then he asked her if she would like to be his valentine.
She said "oh, yes!"
The mouse got the meat, a new friend and Cloudy and they lived happily ever after.
By Mariah
You did really good story Mariah, especially the part you said, a leopard was sleeping under a warm, shady tree.
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ReplyDeleteI like when u said who said you can eat my meat
ReplyDeletethat is a good story mariah i like it because it is a cute story
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