Sunday, February 12, 2012

Cack


One day a talking mum cat and a yellow duck had a baby named Cack.  20 years past...
He became a spy.  He had a team mate named Max.

One day an evil wizard attacked the agency.  the evil wizard kidnapped the chief and then he brought him to a bad team named Doom.  The leader was a chameleon.  Cack and Max were the only hope.  So Cack and Max took a helicopter.  Cack kicked the chameleon in the face.  He rescued the chief.  Cack and Max became the heroes!

By Eric
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10 comments:

  1. DarcyFebruary 12, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    I liked your story because the chameleon is off Tuff Puppy.

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  2. HannahFebruary 12, 2012 at 5:22 PM

    I really liked your story but it could even better if it had some more describing words.

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  3. LatishaFebruary 12, 2012 at 5:23 PM

    I like how you used your imagination

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  4. shawneyFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:29 PM

    your storys like tuff puppy Eric

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  5. cleoFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:37 PM

    Eric I rely like the specel agincy stuff

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  6. shontayaFebruary 28, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    your storys like tuff puppy eric

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  7. loraFebruary 28, 2012 at 7:04 PM

    i love your story Eric

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  8. shontayaFebruary 29, 2012 at 7:24 PM

    i realy like your agincy stuff

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  9. shontayaMarch 1, 2012 at 6:19 PM

    i realy like it when u said 20 years past

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  10. shontayaMarch 26, 2012 at 6:32 PM

    I like it when you said the evil wizard kidnaped the cheif

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